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  • Indonesia

    • hi, everybody!nice to meet you all. i reallyfor the first time, i'm just gonna write about my country ,Indonesia. for most of developed country out there, Indonesia maybe is just another poor developing country which still encounter with some economic and social issue.
    • Maybe you all heard Indonesia only when there's a bom or natural disaster or conflict or any other bad news. well, maybe in the past we could be proud with our badminton achievements, but now we lack of victory and title.
    • but, as a true Indonesian (although my dad is Chinese, i'm still proud to call myself a true Indonesian) I can't help but to love this country. different from popular belief that we are a poor country, for me, my country is so rich. can you believe that we have more that 400 tribes here and hundreds languages spoken?
    • (well, i found this fact in the internet..) from traditional languages to slang and profanity. hehe. and also not to forget to mention how beautiful Indonesia is.
    • if you heard about terrorist in Indonesia, please believe that we, as an indonesian, never agreed with their actions. we (and i believe all people) never think that killing innocent people can bring peace in the world or even get you to heaven.
    • that's all from me.
  • Have a good day, everybody.. God bless

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    • hi, everybody!nice to meet you all. i reallyfor the first time, i'm just gonna write about my country ,Indonesia. for most of developed country out there, Indonesia maybe is just another poor developing country which still encounter with some economic and social issue.
      Сада гласајте !
    • hi, everybody!nice to meet you all. i reallyforThis's the firist time, i'mve just gonna writeten about my country ,-Indonesia. fFor most of developed country out there, Indonesia maybe isight be just another poor developing country which still encounterface and solve with some economic and social issue.
      gauconngungongauconngungon profile picture Коментари 1
      Сада гласајте !
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    • Maybe you all heard Indonesia only when there's a bom or natural disaster or conflict or any other bad news. well, maybe in the past we could be proud with our badminton achievements, but now we lack of victory and title.
      Сада гласајте !
    • Maybe you've all heard about Indonesia, Not only whenis there's a bom or natural disaster or conflict or any, but also there is other bad news. well, maybePerhaps in the past we could be proud withof our badminton achievements, but now we lack of victory and title.
      gauconngungongauconngungon profile picture Коментари
      Сада гласајте !
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    • but, as a true Indonesian (although my dad is Chinese, i'm still proud to call myself a true Indonesian) I can't help but to love this country. different from popular belief that we are a poor country, for me, my country is so rich. can you believe that we have more that 400 tribes here and hundreds languages spoken?
      Сада гласајте !
    • ¶but,However as a trunative Indonesian (although my dad is Chinese, i'm still proud tof calling myself a trus native Indonesian) I can't help but to love this country. is different from popular belief that we areIndonesia is a poor country, for me, my country is so rich for me. can you believe that we have more thatn 400 tribes here and hundreds languages is used and spoken?
      gauconngungongauconngungon profile picture Коментари
      Сада гласајте !
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    • (well, i found this fact in the internet..) from traditional languages to slang and profanity. hehe. and also not to forget to mention how beautiful Indonesia is.
      Сада гласајте !
    • (well, i found this fact in the internet..) from traditional languages to slang and profanity. hehe. and alsoAlso, lets not to forget to mention how beautiful Indonesia is.
      tazautazau profile picture Коментари
      Сада гласајте !
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    • if you heard about terrorist in Indonesia, please believe that we, as an indonesian, never agreed with their actions. we (and i believe all people) never think that killing innocent people can bring peace in the world or even get you to heaven.
      Сада гласајте !
    • if you heard about terrorist in Indonesia, please believe that wein us , as an iIndonesian, i never agreed with theirsuch actions. wWe (and iall believe allin people) that never think that killing innocent people can bring peace into the world or even gettake you to heaven.
      gauconngungongauconngungon profile picture Коментари
      Сада гласајте !
    • ¶iIf you heard about terrorists in Indonesia, please believe that we, as an indonesian, never agreed with their actions. wme when I say, that we, as the majority of the Indonesian people, also despise such terrible actions that these few terrible monsters create.¶We (and i believe all sane, decent people) never think that killing innocent people can bring peace in the world or even get you to heaven. ¶Sadly, every country has some horrible people in it. It the actions of these few horrible people which are seen and publicized on a large scale, scaring the rest of us as a society, who hate what the bad few do, just as much as you hate them. Please don't blame all the people in our country, for the actions of the worst few in our country! Thanks!
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