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  • 8.2

    • I went to Walsall college in the morning for my assessment, terrible weather today, a wind storm and raining all the day.
    • I had my English test on the computer, the persons in charge were very busy, I had questions and an essay to do.
    • Once I done it, I gave it to the tutor and she said to my English course will be in Monday starting at 6 pm until 9 pm also if I cannot assist to a course I have to contact and tell them by advance and they will give my homework as well.
    • After my assessment I went to St Matthew's Hall for lunch : sweet potato curry with strongbow dark fruit, I really enjoyed my meal, very delicious and tasty.
    • Also I posted a April's letter she asked me to post it.
    • Then I went to the gym and worked out abdominals and shoulders.
    • I bought new bottle of almond milk and some bananas and Ferrero rocher for April.

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    • I went to Walsall college in the morning for my assessment, terrible weather today, a wind storm and raining all the day.
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    • This morning, I went to Walsall college in the morning for my assessment, terrible weather today, a wind storm. The weather was terrible today. There was a storm and it was windy and raining all the day.
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    • Once I done it, I gave it to the tutor and she said to my English course will be in Monday starting at 6 pm until 9 pm also if I cannot assist to a course I have to contact and tell them by advance and they will give my homework as well.
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    • Once I donefinished it, I gave it to the tutor, and she said tohat my English course will be ion Monday starting ats from 6 pm until 9 pm a. Also, if I cannot assist tottend a course, I have to contact and tell them byin advance and they will give my homework as well.
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    • After my assessment I went to St Matthew's Hall for lunch : sweet potato curry with strongbow dark fruit, I really enjoyed my meal, very delicious and tasty.
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    • After my assessment, I went to St Matthew's Hall for lunch :. I had sweet potato curry with strongbow dark fruit,. I really enjoyed my meal,. It was very delicious and tasty.
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