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Text from FernandoH - English

  • Correct me please

  • All my senses had gone and this time there’s no turning back I think.
  • I cried when my voice kept quiet and I fainted when my ears didn’t want to hear again.
    • Every night, when I try to get asleep, I feel how my feelings are getting away ¿where?
    • I don’t know but I just realize that when all my feelings are warding off, my mind is coming clear over and over.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English