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I need your help and I got it, yes that's true but this is useless to post here my stuff..I need somebody I can Email my stuff and he will email it back to me...

The best would be somebody from the USA, someone, who reads a lot of books since his childhood and maybe is a teacher with English degree I CANNOT AFFORD A BOOK EDITOR OR A TEACHER ): Yes I read English books as well (for the last two years) Yes, I learn English since I was 13 or 14 years old I don`t remember...

I think my greatest problems are with the style and punctuation in long sentences... THANK YOU...