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- I introduce myself
- Hello.
- I am a nineteen years old with two main features, a strong love for music, films and art in general and a passion for the travel.
- I live in Rome now but I hope to move on in Russia soon.
- In fact I am a russian student.
- I attend the university, but in my spare time I fancy to get around in Rome with my bike or the bus.
- I have few friends but really good, I glad to go out with them, for example recently we have visited the most important museum of the city.
- I live on the outskirt but I am able to get to the centre in a short time, normally 20 minutes on bus.
- My favourite kind of music is Progressive Rock.

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- I am a nineteen years old with two main features, a strong love for music, films and art in general and a passion for the travel.
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- I am a nineteen years old with two main ~~features,~~three passions: a strong love for music, films and art in general, and ~~a passion for the~~constant travel.ing.
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- I live in Rome now but I hope to move on in Russia soon.
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- In fact I am a russian student.
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- I attend the university, but in my spare time I fancy to get around in Rome with my bike or the bus.
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- I attend ~~the~~a university, but in my spare time I fancy ~~to get~~going around in Rome ~~with~~by riding my bike or taking the bus.
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- I have few friends but really good, I glad to go out with them, for example recently we have visited the most important museum of the city.
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- I have few ~~friends but really good, I gla~~really good friends, and I'm always excited to go out with them~~, f~~. For example: recently, we have visited the most important museum of the city.
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- I live on the outskirt but I am able to get to the centre in a short time, normally 20 minutes on bus.
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- I live on the outskirt, but I am able to get to the centre of Rome in a short time~~, n~~. Normally, it takes 20 minutes onvia bus.
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- My favourite kind of music is Progressive Rock.
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