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Text from Nanouille - English

  • superhero

    • I'll tell you my story: All it began when I whas a teenager, when my parents died.
    • I blam everyone to have deleted/eliminated me my family.
    • I was often angry against people who around me.
    • One day, while I was in rage, it happened to me something special.
    • I was closing my eyes and thinking of desert island where I will be alone and quiet.
    • When suddenly I felt my lungs to compress, the time of a second.
    • When I oppened my eyes, I realized that a miracle had happened, I had arrived in a fraction of second on this island I was dreaming/about which I dreamed.
    • I not believed my eyes.
    • So I closed my eyes thinking hard at another location/place.
    • By magic than a second I was here!
    • Since that day I've traveled the world, I discovered all countries and met many people, which/what made me forge then my grief/sorrow.
    • Now I live with my superpower, or rather this gift that nature give me.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English