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- The story I'd like to interpret is entitled " Village School" and is written by Laurie Lee.
- The author touches upon several crusial problems: the problem relationships between pupils, the problem of low educational level in village schools and the psychological problem.
- The theme is relationships between newcomers and veterans.
- Laurie Lee shows the reader the school life in a village school through his own experience.
- The author reveals the drawbacks of school moments when a pupil comes a new team.
- It is very difficult to find common interest and common language with other pupils.
- The action takes place in village school.At the befinning of this story the author describes terrible conditions in the village school.
- I'd like to quote: " It was a small stone barn divided by a wooden partions into two rooms..." It is an exposition.
- In the plot of the story the author describes his first exciting acquaintance with the schoolmates and the village school.
- Also, the author declares about cruelty at school.
- I'd like to quote: " They picked me up bodily, kicking and bawling, and carried me up to the road." He arouses in us a feeling og sympathy by the main hero.
- It is unfair when the crowd is against one person.
- Also, the author uses a lot of stylistic devices.
- For example: - simile, which makes speech more diverse.
- I'd like to quote: " grit few in my face like shrapnel, spun me round like a top, I felt like a veteran." - metaphor, I'd like to quote: " the potato burned through my thigh".
- - epithet, I'd like to quote: " smouldering temper".
- The climax of this story is the scene in which Laurie was surrounded by guys and they mocked at him.
- There are two main conflicts of this story: Man against environment, Man against himself.
- In the first conflict the author reveals the attitude of the crowd against the newcomer.
- The second conflict the author makes us look inside the main hero.
- He makes us to touch his experiences.
- In the first day of school the author is very timid, he is afraid his peers.
- A week later he becomes more confident " like a veteran".
- The author is the protagonist.
- He is a dynamic round character.
- Antogonists of this story are pupils, his teacher and the author's sisters.
- On the whole I find the story to be interesting and involving.
- The author wants to show us that there is crueity and violence in schools.
- We should be careful for choosing our children's school.
- It is important where the child will lean, communicate and develop.
- The author wants to show us that children often friends against somebody.
- In my opinion schools need qualified psychologists to avoid conflicts.
- They can help to adapt newcomers.
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