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Friends
Hello there.
- I am Ukrainian girl, 16 years old.
- I am looking for friends abroad and I want to improve my English knowledge skills.
- Please answer me)

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- I am Ukrainian girl, 16 years old.
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- I am an Ukrainian girl,. I am 16 years old.
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- I am looking for friends abroad and I want to improve my English knowledge skills.
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- I am looking for friends abroad and I want to improve my English ~~knowled~~language skills.
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