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    • The bar chart describes changes of different types of phone calls popularity in Finland between 1995 and 2004 years.
    • Calls divided into three groups at this chart, namely local landline calls, national & international landline calls, and mobile calls.
    • In 1995 differences were most catalytic.
    • Local calls were most popular and number of them reach 12000 million.
    • Quantity of international calls was twice less, and number of mobile calls was at the bottom.
    • During the time period number of the types of calls was increasing with the exception of local calls that reached a peak in 2001 and then went down sharply.
    • Number of international calls increased at the steady rate during the time range and in 2004 reached almost doubled number in comparison with 1995.
    • Although number of mobile calls was rocketed from the bottom in 1995 to almost 10000 million in 2004.
    • All in all, in Finland during the period of time overall number of calls was incredibly increased, but owing to decline of local calls in last years, in 2004 the number of them were unchanged in comparison with 1995 year.

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    • The bar chart describes changes of different types of phone calls popularity in Finland between 1995 and 2004 years.
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    • The bar chart describes the changes in popularity of different types of phone calls popularity in Finland between 1995 and 2004 years.
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    • Calls divided into three groups at this chart, namely local landline calls, national & international landline calls, and mobile calls.
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    • CallsThe calls are divided into three groups aton this chart, namely; local landline calls, national & international landline calls, and mobile calls.
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    • During the time period number of the types of calls was increasing with the exception of local calls that reached a peak in 2001 and then went down sharply.
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    • During theis time period number of the, the amounts of the different types of calls wasere increasing, with the exception of local calls that, which reached a peak in 2001 and then went down sharplybefore sharply decreasing.
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    • Number of international calls increased at the steady rate during the time range and in 2004 reached almost doubled number in comparison with 1995.
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    • NThe number of international calls increased at thea steady rate during the specified time range, and in 2004 they reached almost doubled the number in comparison withof those made in 1995.
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    • All in all, in Finland during the period of time overall number of calls was incredibly increased, but owing to decline of local calls in last years, in 2004 the number of them were unchanged in comparison with 1995 year.
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    • All in all, in Finland during the period of tim, the overall number of calls was incredibly increased, butincreased at an incredible rate during this period of time. However, owing to the decline of local calls in lastprevious years, in 2004 the number of themamounts were unchanged in comparison with 1995 year. ¶.
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