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    • My kitty

    • I'm doin' my thing, when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap, I love my cat, but today she dont want that I work, then, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kitty.
    • I feel very relaxing when I do tickle my cat.
    • I took affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, from that day onwards I love the cats, my cell phone is a little cat, my key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home".
    • Today my cat started to venture at Xiomy's home, but meow when she saw the dog.
    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to take my dinner, and probably I started to long in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D

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    • I'm doin' my thing, when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap, I love my cat, but today she dont want that I work, then, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kitty.
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    • I'm doin' my thing, when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap,. I love my cat, but today she donesn't want that I work, then, I went to my bed ,me to work. I brought her, an to my bed hands on the cat for pet/tickle tod my kitty.
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    • I'm was just doin' my thing, when my kitten came, along and jumped up and sat on my lap,. I love my cat, but today she donesn't want that Ime to do my work, t. ¶Then, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat foringing her with me, and used my hands to tickle to my kitty.!
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    • I'm was doin'g my thing,s when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap,. I love my cat, but today she dont want that Ishe did not let me work, then, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kitty. too, and tickled her with my hands.
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    • I took affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, from that day onwards I love the cats, my cell phone is a little cat, my key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home".
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    • I tookdeveloped affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, f. From that day onwards, I loved the cats, mm. My cell phone is a little cat, m [has a picture of a little cat?]. My key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home" [consider revising this sentence].
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    • I tookfelt affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, f. From that day onwards, I love thed cats, m. My cell phone is a little cat, and my key chain is a cat from "cChi's sSweet hHome"."
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    • I took affectiondeveloped for the cats when I first drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, from.Since that day onwards I love theI have loved cats, m. My cell phone is a little cat, m. My key chain is a cat from "cChi's sSweet hHome".
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    • I took affection for the cats whenam passionate about cats. Since the day I drew a little cat oin my notebook in the art class, from that day onwards I felt I love the cats, m.My cell phone iback cover has a little cat.Also, my key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home".
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to take my dinner, and probably I started to long in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to take my dinner, and probably I started to long in my favorite place where I'mhave dinner. I will probably hang out with Xiomy and, Fifi, and my kitty :D.
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to tmake my dinner, and. I am probably I ?started to long? in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty. :D
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty, and latter, I'm going to takeeat my dinner, and probably I started to long ingo to my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi, my kitty. :D
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to will take my dinner, and probably I started to lounge in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty , , and latter I'm going to takhave my dinner, and probably I started towill stay long in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi, my kitty, :D
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