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My dream
This night, I've been dreaming of you.
I was there, and we talked a little bit.
- I can't remember about what. Black out.
Then you came to offer us some presents, and you may have brought a cake too, but I'm not really sure about it.
By "us", I mean a few people and me, but once more, I don't remember who they were.
The present you offered me was a pair of light pink trousers.
- It's not the kind of clothes I'd wear in my daily life, but I know I felt happy because it was from you, and that meant a lot to me.

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- My dream
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- This night, I've been dreaming of you.
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- I was there, and we talked a little bit.
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- I can't remember about what. Black out.
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- I can't remember about what. BI blacked out.
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- Then you came to offer us some presents, and you may have brought a cake too, but I'm not really sure about it.
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- By "us", I mean a few people and me, but once more, I don't remember who they were.
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- The present you offered me was a pair of light pink trousers.
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- It's not the kind of clothes I'd wear in my daily life, but I know I felt happy because it was from you, and that meant a lot to me.
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- It's not the kind of clothes which I'd wear in my daily life, but I knowew that I felt happy because it was from you, and that meant a lot tofor me.
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