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Text from KUANGQUE055 - English

    • About Long Holidays

    • We will have the first long holiday in our college life.
    • Students almost like holiday, because we will have more time to do our own things in the holiday, we can relax ourselves and have a good time with our friends.
    • But long holidays probably have many problems.
    • First, the students' safety can't be ensured during the holiday,it might be unsafe.
    • Secondly,some students don't know how to arrange their time calculated, they might have unhealthy living habits, for example, they might skip breakfast, play the computer games all time, it will waste time.
    • How to spend a valuable long holiday?
    • We can try to read some useful books, it's beneficial to us.
    • We can study a language by watching movies or taking part in some activities after class.
    • We can also do exercise to keep healthy.
    • We can do housework to help our parents lightning the load.
    • Doing part-time job is also a good way to spend a wonderful long holiday.
    • If you spend your holiday to do more useful things, you will improve yourself and have a healthy life.

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