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Picnic
- yesterday .
- I'm and your friends go to the tigris river so as to hunter fish , swiming , where we took boat and some food , It's feel good .

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- yesterday .
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- ~~yesterday .~~Yesterday.... (The word yesterday cannot be one sentence alone, a coma , <---- is needed)
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- I'm and your friends go to the tigris river so as to hunter fish , swiming , where we took boat and some food , It's feel good .
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- ~~I'm and your friends go~~My friends and I went to the tTigris rRiver ~~so as~~ to hunte for fish ,and swim~~ing , where we took boat and~~. We road a boat on the river and ate some food ,. It's fe~~el good .~~lt great.
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