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  • Rio

  • All my life I've dreamed about visiting a wonderful city in South America. It was Rio.
  • And now my dream comes true .
    • My family a I went to Brazil to learn more about the culture, people and city of the country.
    • And i would like to tell you my story about where I stayed a few days in Brazil.
    • Rio-de-Janeiro is the birthplace of the strongest players in football in the world.
    • Also a country of bright carnivals.
    • When we went to Antonio Jobim airport chek in at 8.00a.m.
    • Coming out of the airport we found our bus that will take us to the city's centre.
    • In the title of Rio sounds a holiday.
    • It seems that everybody and everything is dancing, simging and playng in football.
    • But of course there are only grandiose, brightest and the most fiery carnivals.
    • As we drove, I noticed that one side of city consist of gray buildings and on the other side on endless blue ocean.
    • Arrive at our hotel - all rooms were on the 10th floor with great view of the ocean.
    • After a snack we had an hour a half to relax before continue the journey.
    • Then we went to the city.
    • In Rio located one of the most famous statues in the world, one of the most recognizable states.
  • It is Christ the Redeemer.
    • It stands on Corcovado Hill above the city.
    • All people can climb to the statue.
    • Only the rich can do it by helicopter.
  • The poor can do that by Corcovado Train.
  • The vertex is known for its statue of Christ the Redeemer and its views over the city and beaches of Rio.
    • Jessus is depicted with outstretched arms to the far statue looks like a cross.
    • Jessus embraces the city and at the same time blesses the city.
  • It was amazing to see the statue so close.
    • From the point of the city is very beautiful view.
  • After we came back to the hotel to relax and have lunch.
  • But on the way in our hotel, we saw the National Musem of Brazil.
  • It is located in Quinta-de-BoaVista park.
  • Originally the museum collected specimens of flora and fauna.
    • But most of all were the birds.
    • And the museum got the name is 'Birds House'.
  • That was very interesting to visit this place.
    • After dinner my family and I decided to visit the Botanical Garden. tthe Botanical Garden of Rio covers an area of 137 hetares of which 83 hectares - wildlife.
  • Hereis about 6000 a wide variety of plant species.
  • In the garden was an amazing smell of different flowers.
  • All of it interfere butit was exactly wonderful.
  • Returning hotel in the evening we had dinner and went to bed.
  • That was a very exaiting day in my life.
  • I was sure thatthe next day will be even better than this.
  • The next morning we had brekfast and went for a walk around the ciry on foot.
  • We were expected a carnival in the evening.
  • So the streets were going to the crowds in the beautiful carnival costumes.
  • Everything was colourful, circle was music, every one was happy.
  • It was a spectacular show, which was attended by a lot of people and machines that were decarated.
  • There were a lot of white smile.
  • This weekend passed quickly and we had to go home.
  • Arrived at the airport we waited for our flight a few hours.
  • Flight delayed twice a day for unknown reasons.
  • But it was the most memorable days of my life.
  • So many happy people i have never seen.I was really impressed.
    • If you want to spend a fun time and just relax on the beach, so you shold visit Brazil.

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