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Text from whiterose1 - English

  • Hi everyone,

    • today i am a little depressed, i don't know how can i solve my problem with english.
    • i want to write in english without mistakes.
    • i do my best to improve my english but i feel that i am in the same place. nothing has changed.
    • perhaps i need for some advice from one who has experience in this.
    • these days i am completely confused.
    • sometime you saw me reading a book in english sometime you saw me hearing for something in english.
    • and this site it's really great.
    • but it needs for attend people. it's close to be disused.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English