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  • Going to work abroad: an exciting opportunity or a scary one?

    • Every year, more and mora people going to work abroad because of works in our country are disappearing, they don´t find a job according with their studies or their jobs aren´t well-paid.
    • Spending yo your time going to work abroad has many advantages.
    • The main advantages is that you can learn a new language.
  • Another advantage is the self-confidence that you gain from doing these experiences.
    • In addition, traveling let you to know different kind of people.
  • On the other hand, there are also some important disadvantages.
    • Although this opportunity let you to enjoy the city like a tourist, this adventure has a lot of risks.
  • An important disadvantage is that your family and friends are far away.
    • Another disadvantage is that you have to be extremely responsible, because you are alone in a new city.
    • Furthermore, learning a new language is a bite difficult at the beginning, especially if you don´t speak it.
    • To sum up, from my point of view, going to work abroad have both advantages and disadvantages, and you have to choose...
  • Which group do you prefer?

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genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
Every year, more and mora people going to work abroad because of works in our country are disappearing, they don´t find a job according with their studies or their jobs aren´t well-paid.
Every year, more and morae people going to work abroad because of works in our country areis disappearing, t. They don´can't find a job according with their studies or their jobs aren´ isn't well-paid.


blakebeaton profile picture blakebeatonMarch 2015
Every year, more and mora people going to work abroad because of works in our country are disappearing, they don´t find a job according with their studies or their jobs aren´t well-paid.
Every year, more and morae people are going to work abroad because of workjobs in our country are disappearing, if they don´can't find a job according withto their studies or their jobs aren´tthey wont be well- paid.
genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
To sum up, from my point of view, going to work abroad have both advantages and disadvantages, and you have to choose...
To sum up, from my point of view, going to working abroad haves both advantages and disadvantages, and you have to choose...
genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
Furthermore, learning a new language is a bite difficult at the beginning, especially if you don´t speak it.
Furthermore, learning a new language is a bite difficult at the beginning, especially if you don´'t speak it.
genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
Another disadvantage is that you have to be extremely responsible, because you are alone in a new city.
Another disadvantage is that you have to be extremely responsible, because you are alone in a new city.
genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
Although this opportunity let you to enjoy the city like a tourist, this adventure has a lot of risks.
Although this opportunity lets you to enjoy the city like a tourist, this adventure has a lot of risks.
genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
In addition, traveling let you to know different kind of people.
In addition, traveling lets you to know about different kinds of people.
genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
The main advantages is that you can learn a new language.
The main advantages is that you can learn a new language.
genzaimu profile picture genzaimuMarch 2015
Spending yo your time going to work abroad has many advantages.
Spending yo your time going to working abroad has many advantages.