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I wanted to write a formal kind reminder letter. Is this text suitable and understable?

~~Dear Mr. Brown,

 


We are hoping you will have time to deal with yx problems.

Recognizing your very busy schedule, I’m sending you this note to reply our letters.

I’m sending you this note as a reminder to send us the filled excel sheet.

Enclosed is the actual(newest) excel sheet.

 Would you please to answer our question about the Z problem issue?

We are hoping you will have time to deal with xy problems.


 I’m sincerely looking forward to receiving your reply. Thank you  in advanced!

 

Best regards,

Gábor Róta

 

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Iephus profile picture IephusFebruary 2016
It's very good! There are only a few issues that I see. I've re-done it below for you to show differences.


~~Dear Mr. Brown:




We are hoping you will have time to deal with yx problems.

Recognizing your very busy schedule, I’m sending you this note in reply our letters, and as a reminder to send us the filled excel sheet.

Enclosed is the updated excel sheet.

Would you please to answer our question about the Z problem issue?

We are hoping you will have time to deal with xy problems.


I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance!



Best regards,

Gábor Róta
exRanger profile picture exRangerJune 2020
Dear Mr. Brown,

We are hoping you still have the time to address the "xy" and "Z" problems.

Recognizing your very busy schedule, I’m sending you this note as a reminder to send us the completed Excel spreadsheet.
Please find attached the most recent version of the spreadsheet. Would you also answer our question about the "Z" problem?

I look forward to receiving your reply. Thank you in advance!

Best,

Gábor Róta
exRanger profile picture exRangerOctober 2018

Still a few problematic passages in the "corrected" version:

re: Recognizing your very busy schedule, I’m sending you this note in reply our letters, and as a reminder to send us the filled excel sheet.

> Recognizing your very busy schedule, I’m sending you this note in response to our letters, and as a reminder to send us the updated Excel spreadsheet.

re: Enclosed is the updated excel sheet.

> Please find enclosed the updated spreadsheet. (note: the word "attached" would probably be better than "encloised"))

re: Would you please to answer our question about the Z problem issue?

> Would you kindly answer our question regarding the Z issue? (word "problem" is superfluous)