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Is this sentence correct or there is best way to say it?

I'm Christian from Tenerife and I'm 33 years old. (twice 'I'm') 

Hi, I'm from Tenerife, Canary Islands, Spain.I'm 33 years old and I would like to find somebody to learn and improve my poor English. If you are interesting (or interested?) please leave me an answer.

Bye!

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vincent profile picture vincent   

hey you can also use the correction tool

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