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LenineDeMoura'den mesaj - English

  • My New House.

  • I haven't been able to write because I recently moved out of my brother's house.
    • I needed to be near college and that's why I am now living with some college friends.
  • I am living with two boys and one girl.
  • It is great to be near the university.
    • In the past, it took me three and a half hour sitting on buses to go and to come back from college.
    • Now I just need to walk five minutes and I am there.
  • Although I like my new apartment, I miss my brother a lot.
  • It was good to be with him again.
    • We have lived together when I was five.
    • After he moved out to study and work we didn't see each other many times.
  • I have learned a lot with him, but I think it's time to face new challenges.

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