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  • A National Phenomenon

    • People are so different all around the world.
    • Each with his own worldview, purposes and ideals.
    • I’m sure does not exist one truth as one ideal person.
    • You can pass through oneself lots of all, but choose the best, of course the best from your point.
    • There are some national peculiarities which characteristic a nation, such as for example English primness, Georgian hospitality, German pedantry and so on.
  • Those characteristics can cause different reactions and some of them truly admirable.
    • Especially I’m fascinated by Danish hygge and Japanese ability to abstract and skill of Zanshin.
    • And if the Japanese ideas is still difficult for me, the Danish ones I understood and could follow.
  • Probably it connected with similar climatic conditions - the so-called Nordic character of our localities makes these ideas easy and pleasant.
    • I also find a bicycle the best means of transportation, adore nature and spend lots of time outside in a warm period, and in a cold period I like plaids, candles and fire.
    • Now I came up to another activity popular between Scandinavian.
  • It’s winter swimming.
  • I just realized that I do not want to stop my usual morning swimming.
    • I’m not sure will it work or not.
    • But the water in the Baltic sea has already down to 15°C, which is corresponds to the concept of ”cold” water (+4-15°C).
    • As I’m still feel comfortable the start has been given.
  • Besides, to understood the idea of winter swimming better I’m reading the book ”Winter Swimming: The Nordic Way Towards a Healthier and Happier Life” by Susanna Søberg.
    • Although there are many other great qualities among other nationals, at this moment I especially would like to visit these two countries to understand better this phenomenon of the most balanced and happier people in the world.

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    • You can pass through oneself lots of all, but choose the best, of course the best from your point.
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    • You can pass through oneself lots of allendlessly analyze what is perfection in a person, but choose the best, of course, the best from your own standpoint.
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    • There are some national peculiarities which characteristic a nation, such as for example English primness, Georgian hospitality, German pedantry and so on.
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    • There are some national peculiarities which characteristiczes a nation, such as for example English primness, Georgian hospitality, German pedantry and so on.
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    • Especially I’m fascinated by Danish hygge and Japanese ability to abstract and skill of Zanshin.
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    • EI’m especially I’m fascinated by Danish hygge and the Japanese ability to abstract andbe able to extract oneself from this physical world and the skill of Zanshin.
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    • And if the Japanese ideas is still difficult for me, the Danish ones I understood and could follow.
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    • And if thWhile Japanese ideas isare still difficult for me, the Danish ones I could understood and couland and follow.
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    • Probably it connected with similar climatic conditions - the so-called Nordic character of our localities makes these ideas easy and pleasant.
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    • I also find a bicycle the best means of transportation, adore nature and spend lots of time outside in a warm period, and in a cold period I like plaids, candles and fire.
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    • I also find athe bicycle the best means of transportation, adore nature and spend lots of time outside in a warm period, and in a cold period. During cold times I like plaids, candles and fire.
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    • But the water in the Baltic sea has already down to 15°C, which is corresponds to the concept of ”cold” water (+4-15°C).
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    • But the water in the Baltic sea has already gone down to 15°C, which is corresponds to the concept of ”cold” water (+4-15°C).
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    • Besides, to understood the idea of winter swimming better I’m reading the book ”Winter Swimming: The Nordic Way Towards a Healthier and Happier Life” by Susanna Søberg.
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    • Although there are many other great qualities among other nationals, at this moment I especially would like to visit these two countries to understand better this phenomenon of the most balanced and happier people in the world.
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    • Although there are many other great qualities among other nationals, at this moment I especially would like to visit these two countries to understand better thise phenomenona of the most balanced and happierst people in the world.
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