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    • The part of an essay about teens using social media

    • The present data indicates several differences in how often teenagers in the UK use social medias.
    • For example, teenagers who do not use social media is approximately twice as commonly selected as once a week the figures being 18% for the former, in contrast with 8% for the latter.
    • If can be inferred from the above that teenagers use social media very often.
    • The statistics may reveal a problem related to using social media.
    • Due to the fact that teenagers use social media more than once a day is the most common reason, it is unlikely that many adolescents lack in-person interaction.
    • This can result in adolescents becoming antisocial.

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    • The present data indicates several differences in how often teenagers in the UK use social medias.
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    • The present data indicates several differences in how often teenagers in the UK use social medias.
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    • The presentContemporary data indicates several differences in how often that teenagers in the UK use social media in many different ways.
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    • For example, teenagers who do not use social media is approximately twice as commonly selected as once a week the figures being 18% for the former, in contrast with 8% for the latter.
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    • For example, teenagers who do not use social media isare approximately twice as commonly selected as as those who use such media once a week, the figures being 18% for the former, in contrast with 8% for the latter.
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    • For example,instance, there are more than twice as many teenagers (18%) who do not use social media is approximately twice as commonly selected as once a week the figures being 18% for the former, in contrast with 8% for the latter.as there are teenagers (8%) who use social media once per week.¶

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    • The statistics may reveal a problem related to using social media.
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    • The statisticsse data may reveal a problem related to using social media.

      NOTE: The term "data' is, in PROPER ENGLISH, a plural for of the singular "datum". Thus, verbal conjugations associated with the term "data" must be in the plural form for past, present and future tenses.¶

      Example using verb "to be": "data are"; "data were"; "data will be"
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    • Due to the fact that teenagers use social media more than once a day is the most common reason, it is unlikely that many adolescents lack in-person interaction.
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    • Due to the fact that teenagers use social media more than once a day is the most common reasoncase, it is unlikely that many adolescents lack in-person interaction.
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    • Due to the fact thaEven though most teenagers use social media more than once a day is the most common reason, it is unlikely that many adolescentsthey lack for in-person interaction(s).
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