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  • Describing my friend

    • my best friend, sara, has many likeable qualities.
    • First of all , She is a gorgeous looking girl with short black hair trumping over her shoulders , arresting blue eyes look just like the endless sea when you gaze at them , a small nose and sweet pink lips .
  • In addition, she has a deep comforting voice and a delicate vanilla smell .
  • Moreover, she wears hijab, yet She always coordinates her clothes in a chic and elegant way. furthermore , Sara is a kind-hearted and trustworthy person . she always helps and cares about all the persons around her, and they all love her. finally, she is a smart girl loves to read novels and poems .
  • To sum up, my friend is an adorable girl; I feel lucky I have her in my life .

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    • First of all , She is a gorgeous looking girl with short black hair trumping over her shoulders , arresting blue eyes look just like the endless sea when you gaze at them , a small nose and sweet pink lips .
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    • First of all , Sshe is a gorgeous looking girl with short black hair trumping over her shoulders , arresting blue eyes looking just like the endless sea when you gaze atinto them , a small nose and sweet pink lips .
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    • Moreover, she wears hijab, yet She always coordinates her clothes in a chic and elegant way. furthermore , Sara is a kind-hearted and trustworthy person . she always helps and cares about all the persons around her, and they all love her. finally, she is a smart girl loves to read novels and poems .
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