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  • High school and university education

    • There are similarities and differences between high school and university education in education mainstay, cost and future success.
    • The high school education depends on the teachers, whereas the university education is eighty percents depend on the students themself.
  • Regarding the cost, most countries provide free high school education for their residents.
    • On the other hand, the university education is costly, and many students cannot afford it.
    • In a short amount of time, the university education was essential for future success.
    • However, many figures nowadays reach their goals without completing their education, the present of highly educated person is mandatory in many fields especially in experimental and research fields.
  • In summary, nobody can deny the influence of high school and university education on one’s life.
    • Both of them are a short term sacrifice which yield to long time success.

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    • There are similarities and differences between high school and university education in education mainstay, cost and future success.
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    • There are similarities and differences between high school and university education in education mainstayterms of support, cost and future success.
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    • The high school education depends on the teachers, whereas the university education is eighty percents depend on the students themself.
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    • The high school education depends on the teachers, whereas the university education is eighty percents depends on the students themselfves in eighty percent.
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    • The hHigh school education depends on the teachers, whereas the university education is eighty percents dependant on the students themself.
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    • In a short amount of time, the university education was essential for future success.
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    • In a short amount of time, theNot so long ago, university education was essential forto achieving future success in life.
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    • In a short amount of time, thethe recent past, a university education was essential for future success.
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    • However, many figures nowadays reach their goals without completing their education, the present of highly educated person is mandatory in many fields especially in experimental and research fields.
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    • However, many figures nowadaysnowadays many people reach their goals without completing their education, t. The presentce of highly educated personople is mandatory in many fields, especially inscientific study or experimental and research fields.
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    • However, many figureswell-known people nowadays reach their goals without completing their education, the present of. In any case, highly educated person is mandatoryople is absolutely required in many fields - especially in experimental and research fieldareas.
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