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    • Public school and private school

    • Although there are many things that distinguish private school from public school ,the similarities between them are quite significant .
    • First of all , both school are recognised by the state.
    • The students who graduate from both these schools will obtain a certificate that enables him to work in the country.
    • In addition, as just as private school public school assign skills teacher with high levels to teach in them .
    • Another similarity between private school and public school is that both of them have educational aim .
    • They dedicate all what is required to highly educate their students.
    • To sum up , it is clear that private school and public school are different in some point, yet they markedly have many things in common.

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    • Although there are many things that distinguish private school from public school ,the similarities between them are quite significant .
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    • Although there are many things that distinguish private schools from public schools, ,the similarities between them are quite significant .
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    • Although there are many things that distinguish private school fromand public schools, ,the similarities between them are quite significant .
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    • The students who graduate from both these schools will obtain a certificate that enables him to work in the country.
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    • The students who graduate from botheither of these schools will obtain a certificate that enables hithem to work in the country.
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    • The sStudents who graduate from both these schools will obtain a certificate that enables him to work in the countryeither obtain a certificate enabling employment anywhere.
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    • In addition, as just as private school public school assign skills teacher with high levels to teach in them .
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    • In addition, as just as private schools, public schools assign a skills teacher with high levels to teach in them .
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    • In addition, as just as in private schools, public schools assign skills teachers with high levels to teach in them ho are sufficiently qualified.
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    • Another similarity between private school and public school is that both of them have educational aim .
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    • Another similarity between private schools and public schools is that both of them have educational aim .
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    • Another similarity between private school and public schools is that both of them have educational aim aim to educate.
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    • To sum up , it is clear that private school and public school are different in some point, yet they markedly have many things in common.
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    • To sum up , it is clear that private schools and public schools are different in some points, yet they markedly have many things in common.
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    • To sum up , it is clear that private school and public school ares different in some points, yet they markedly have many things in common.
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