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  • Am I lucky

    • ”I’m not lucky ” this the answer of most people when you ask them if think they are lucky or not , yet I’m from the minority who would say that they are lucky .
    • I think that from all the people who suffer from painful diseases , who can’t see ,who can’t move , who go every other day to hospital for hemodialysis and so on , I’m not .
    • Besides, From all the children who grew up without their dads or moms or both of them , I grew up within a very beautiful family that offers me all i need .
    • From all the people who was born in countries with wars , i was born in a peaceful country .
    • So when I think of all this things and many other things, I really feel that I’m lucky, I think that avery person in this world has his problems and so I’m, but there always millions of people who suffer from problems which are much bigger than ours , problems which does not have any solutions , problems which they have no hand in it .
    • That’s why I consider myself lucky , and I’m so grateful for that .

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    • ”I’m not lucky ” this the answer of most people when you ask them if think they are lucky or not , yet I’m from the minority who would say that they are lucky .
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    • "I’m not lucky ” th". This is the answer of most people when you ask them if think they are lucky or not , y. Yet I’m from the minority who would say that they are lucky .
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    • I think that from all the people who suffer from painful diseases , who can’t see ,who can’t move , who go every other day to hospital for hemodialysis and so on , I’m not .
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    • I think that fromof all the people who suffer from painful diseases , who can’t see ,who can’tor move ,and who go every other day to hospital for hemodialysis and so on ,. I'm not one of them.
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    • Besides, From all the children who grew up without their dads or moms or both of them , I grew up within a very beautiful family that offers me all i need .
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    • Besides, FI'm not one of those from all the children who grew up without their dads or moms or both of them ,. Fortunately I grew up within a very beautiful family that offers me all iI need .
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    • So when I think of all this things and many other things, I really feel that I’m lucky, I think that avery person in this world has his problems and so I’m, but there always millions of people who suffer from problems which are much bigger than ours , problems which does not have any solutions , problems which they have no hand in it .
      Vote now!
    • So when I think of all thisese things and many other things, I really feel that I’m lucky, I think that aevery person in this world has his own problems and so I’m do I, but there always millions of people who suffer from problems which are much bigger than ours , problems which does not have any solutions , problems in which they have no hand in it .
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