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  • Skydive experience

    • I’m from Mexico and Recently I went to a little town in Morelos state with friends, the plan it was just walk around the town and enjoy it because it’s a natural zone, but we noticed about a little enterprise which offer skydiving, I didn´t feel afraid about it and otherwhise I felt exciting because in that moment I haven´t done Skydive, when our turn was arriving, we abroad the plane and in the sky I saw throught the window, but I wasn´t still afraid.
    • Suddenly the instructors were preparing to jump, and when that happened, it was done, I was in the sky, I saw beutiful lanscapes , the first 10 seconds I felt afraid and after that I just enjoy the wind hitting my body, it was awesome.

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    • I’m from Mexico and Recently I went to a little town in Morelos state with friends, the plan it was just walk around the town and enjoy it because it’s a natural zone, but we noticed about a little enterprise which offer skydiving, I didn´t feel afraid about it and otherwhise I felt exciting because in that moment I haven´t done Skydive, when our turn was arriving, we abroad the plane and in the sky I saw throught the window, but I wasn´t still afraid.
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    • I'm from Mexico and Rrecently I went to a little town in Morelos state with friends, t. The plan it was just to walk around the town and enjoy it because it's a natural zone, but we noticed about a little enterprise which offered skydiving,. I didn´'t feel afraid about it and otherwhise I feltbut instead excitinged because in that moment I haven´'t done Skydive, wskydived before. When our turn was arrivinged, we abroaboarded the plane and went in the sky . I saw throught the window, but I wasn´t stillstill wasn't afraid.
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