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  • How important is time to you?

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    • Time is so signafisant for me and I believe that I should use my time the best and don’t waste it because time is only things in world we can’t back it and if we don’t utilize it we don’t earn things that we want and we lost many things .
    • Time is like jewelry for us or like a diamond.
  • I wish you the best.

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    • Time is so signafisant for me and I believe that I should use my time the best and don’t waste it because time is only things in world we can’t back it and if we don’t utilize it we don’t earn things that we want and we lost many things .
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    • Time is so signaifiscant for me and I believe that I should use my time in the best and don’way that I can and not waste it because time is the only things in world we can’t back it and iget back. If we don’t utilize it we don’t earnachieve the things that we want and we lostose many thingopportunities .
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    • Time is so signaifiscant for me and I believe that I should use my timeit in the best and don’t waste itway possible because time is only things in world we can’t back it andget back, so if we don’t utilize it we don’t earn things that we want and we lost many things to our best advantage we don’t achieve our goals.
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