Corrections

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Parandatud

Text from vaness182 - English

  • June 28th

    • The parents of my best friend break off the relation last week, they were married since 22 years ago.
    • I don’t know what happened, if exist some infidelity, criticism of conflict, boredom, lack of connection or communication or issues such as money.
    • I believe that issues with money, they are a rich family and the pandemic was terrible for their company.
    • I’m reading about it, because I don’t want to have the same final with my girlfriend.
    • I’ve read and some caught my attention, some couples don’t know the person with accepted a relationship, and have some expectations but it can change after that.
  • When someone have a date everybody try to do the best and pretend be a good person a princess or lord.
    • I rememered my first date with my girlfriend, I was terrible because I drop my soda in her leg, but before that I tried to found all the possible information about her.
    • She has a lot of common interests, time before she askme for a relationship, it was amazing.
    • She was unfaithful me one time, we have never a conflics for money nor anything similar.
    • We past the pandemic together, perhaps that did that our relationship get better, before one we were living separated now we are living in the same flat.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Title
  • Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • I don’t know what happened, if exist some infidelity, criticism of conflict, boredom, lack of connection or communication or issues such as money.
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I don’t know what happened, if exist somebut I believe it could have been infidelity, criticism of conflict, boredom, lack of connection or communication or issues such as money.
      atharo5atharo5 profile picture Kommentaarid
      Vote now!
    • I don’t know what happened, if exist someif there had been infidelity, criticism of, conflict, boredom, lack of connection or communication or issues such as money.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Kommentaarid 1
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • I’ve read and some caught my attention, some couples don’t know the person with accepted a relationship, and have some expectations but it can change after that.
      Vote now!
    • I’ve read and someWhat caught my attention, when I was reading was that some couples don’t really know the person with acceptedin a relationship, and have some expectations, but it can change after that.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Kommentaarid
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • I rememered my first date with my girlfriend, I was terrible because I drop my soda in her leg, but before that I tried to found all the possible information about her.
      Vote now!
    • I remembered my first date with my girlfriend,. I was terrible because I dropped my soda ion her leg, but before that I’d tried to found all theind out all possible information about her.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Kommentaarid
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • We past the pandemic together, perhaps that did that our relationship get better, before one we were living separated now we are living in the same flat.
      Vote now!
    • We pastwent through the pandemic together, p. Perhaps that didbecause of that our relationship geot better, before one we were. Prior to that we'd been living separated nly. Now we are living in the same flat.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Kommentaarid
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10