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    • canada visa letter

    • Gentlemen Embassy Canada I hereby apply to you for the student visa, in order to be able to complete a diploma in fundamentals of hospitality and tourism Co-op in Toronto.
    • I completed my undergraduate studies in modern languages some time ago and for me it is very important to be able to deepen my training with the practice of languages and thus complement and expand my career in a more focused way in the area that attracts me a lot as tourism.
    • I feel that Canada is the ideal place, because thanks to the excellent educational and tourist quality, in addition to the multiculturalism that Toronto offers, I will be able to grow personally and professionally.
    • Being able to have the opportunity to live this great experience in your country, will be very favorable for my future, since on my return I will be able to expand my business, developing my career in one of the various tourism sectors that Mexico offers.
    • Finally, carrying out this goal and completing it is also valuable for me, one more achievement would be a nice way to express to my family all the gratitude I feel for all the support they give me in each step I take.
    • I appreciate your attention Kind regards

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    • Gentlemen Embassy Canada I hereby apply to you for the student visa, in order to be able to complete a diploma in fundamentals of hospitality and tourism Co-op in Toronto.
      Vote agora!
    • Gentlemen¶
      Embassy Canada ¶

      I hereby apply to you

      Canadian Embassy ¶

      Dear Sir/Madam¶

      Re: Application for student visa.¶

      I hereby wish to apply
      for thea student visa, in order to be able to complete a diploma in fthe Fundamentals of hHospitality and tTourism Co-op in Toronto.
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    • I completed my undergraduate studies in modern languages some time ago and for me it is very important to be able to deepen my training with the practice of languages and thus complement and expand my career in a more focused way in the area that attracts me a lot as tourism.
      Vote agora!
    • I completed my undergraduate studies in modern languages some time ago(give the exact time in years / months here) and for me it is very important to be able to deepen my training with thevia practice ofin languages and thus complement and expand my career in a more focused way in the area that attracts me a lot as tourism.
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    • I feel that Canada is the ideal place, because thanks to the excellent educational and tourist quality, in addition to the multiculturalism that Toronto offers, I will be able to grow personally and professionally.
      Vote agora!
    • I feel that Canada is the ideal place, because to undertake such study, thanks to theits excellent educational and tourist qualityies, in addition to the multiculturalism that Toronto offers, I will be abl. This will enable me to grow personally and professionally.
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  • Sentença 4
    • Being able to have the opportunity to live this great experience in your country, will be very favorable for my future, since on my return I will be able to expand my business, developing my career in one of the various tourism sectors that Mexico offers.
      Vote agora!
    • Being able to have the opportunity to live this greatpartake in such an experience in your country, will be very favorable for my future, since o. On my return I will be able to expand my business, thereby developing my career in one of the various tourism sectors that Mexico has to offers.
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    • Finally, carrying out this goal and completing it is also valuable for me, one more achievement would be a nice way to express to my family all the gratitude I feel for all the support they give me in each step I take.
      Vote agora!
    • Finally, carrying out this goal and completing ithis goal is also invaluable for me, as it would be one more achievement would be a nice way to express to my family all the gratitude I feel for all the support they have given me in each step I take.
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  • Sentença 6