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  • Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a French student and, with three of my friends, we are offering you our spontaneous application to join your team for July 2022.
  • We are between 16 and 18 years old.
    • We are to go to study in Latvia for three months from august to November, that’s why we would have an experience and some money for our trip.
    • Moreover, passing a month in England can’t be possible if we are not working for.
    • We have a native speaking French and a good level of English.
    • We are at the high school for the last year, before having a certificate and going to study at the university; that’s why working is essential for us.
    • Having multiple interests and loving travelling and discovering other languages, culture, people, we are looking for experience.
    • In this mind, joining your crew seems formative for us and useful for you.
    • We are invested and give a lot of energy in all our projects and we will be doing our best, no matter the task and the place, we just want a language bath.
  • Don’t hesitate to join us for any further information or reply to my offer.
  • Respectfully Fanny Castel

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    • Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a French student and, with three of my friends, we are offering you our spontaneous application to join your team for July 2022.
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    • We are to go to study in Latvia for three months from august to November, that’s why we would have an experience and some money for our trip.
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    • We are to go to study in Latvia for three months from aAugust to November, t. That’'s why we would have an experience and some money for our trip.
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    • We are at the high school for the last year, before having a certificate and going to study at the university; that’s why working is essential for us.
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    • We are at thehave been in high school for the lpast year, before having a certificate and going to studying at the university; that’'s why working is essential for us.
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    • Having multiple interests and loving travelling and discovering other languages, culture, people, we are looking for experience.
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    • Having multiple interests and also loving to travelling and discovering other languages, culture, and people, we are looking for experience.
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    • We are invested and give a lot of energy in all our projects and we will be doing our best, no matter the task and the place, we just want a language bath.
      투표하세요!
    • We are invested and give a lot of energy in all our projects and w. We will be doingdo our best, no matter the task and the place, we just want a language bath.
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      투표하세요!
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