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    • Today I wake up too late, because I was so lazy, as I hadn’t work today.
    • I thought it was apropiated to rest a little bit more than a normal day of work, so I got up from my bed and started a new day, first I prepared my breakfast, which was fried eggs whith sauces and chocolate.
    • After that my friends went to my house and invited me to go to river and swim a little.
    • We arrived to the river at afternoon, but our look was so bad, the weather was so bad by the time.
    • It started to rain a lot, the river grew and grew every time more and more.
    • as result we decided to returned before what we had planed to returned. we was so cool when we went back to my house, then had lunch and every thing was ok.

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    • I thought it was apropiated to rest a little bit more than a normal day of work, so I got up from my bed and started a new day, first I prepared my breakfast, which was fried eggs whith sauces and chocolate.
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    • I thought it was apropiated to rest a little bit more than a normal day of work, so I got up from my bed and started a newAfter sleeping in a bit, I got up to start the day, first I preparedby making my breakfast, which was of fried eggs whith sauces and chocolate.

      NOTE: That's a real Breakfast Of Champions, eh?
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    • After that my friends went to my house and invited me to go to river and swim a little.
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    • After that my friends went to my house and invicame over and asked if I wanted me to go to river and swim a littleswimming.
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    • We arrived to the river at afternoon, but our look was so bad, the weather was so bad by the time.
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    • We arrived toBy the time we reached the river atin the afternoon, but our look was so bad, the weather was so bad by the timethe weather had turned bad.
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    • as result we decided to returned before what we had planed to returned. we was so cool when we went back to my house, then had lunch and every thing was ok.
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    • as result we decided to returned before what we had planed to returned. we was so cool when we went back to my house, then
      So we returned to my place where we had lunch and every thing was ok.turned out okay.¶

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