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    • Lifestyles have changed a lot due to the development of science and technology.
    • Life is not the same as our ancestor’s time.
  • Weighing the pros and cons of life now and in the past, I believe that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children.
    • The First reason that I can state is that technology has made lives more convenient nowadays.
    • It provides us what we need to do our task not only in a shorter time but also in the easiest way that possible.
  • Technology also has changed the quality of life.
  • For instance, the invention of the telephone has changed our lives a lot.
    • In the past, people used to travel long distances to see their relatives and to be aware of their status.
    • But nowadays with smart mobiles, we have access to all spots of the world where our relatives may live and we could communicate with them easily like making video calls, without any need to travel.
    • Or my grandparents used to wash everything with their hands which was a difficult task and it takes too much time but nowadays all people have at least one washing machine in their home and there is laundry in each house.
    • Also, my grandpa narrates that at that time there were few schools in the town and they used to walk a long distance to reach the destination.
    • And it was annoying, especially in cold winters.
    • But nowadays schools are a lot more than that time and each student receives bus services.
    • Furthermore, the quality of education is not comparable with that time.
  • Today students have so many options and methods to study.
  • There are many educational videos also the internet is the best source for studying.
    • While in the past the only source was the teacher.
    • On the whole, nowadays students have the ideal condition to study comfortably.
    • All in all, there is an ease in our lives considering the past.
    • People can easily obtain almost everything they want.

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