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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

Rédigé par arsen-sabouri - English

  • Hobbies

  • One of my hobbies is sport.
    • I don’t know we can name it hobby or not.
    • Because for some one sport is not a hobby rather it’s like a work as athletics.
  • I play badminton but I don’t sport like athletics.
    • I’ve started play badminton from two years ago when I had gone to a park with my friends to play badminton at first.
    • I had two badminton rackets for years but I had been using those rarely ever.
    • My friends and I were playing that someone move toward us and asked to play with us.
  • Of course, we accepted his request.
    • After a couple of minutes, I noticed that he is a professional player.
    • He was shooting toward us and we couldn’t take those.
  • He’s shoots was very fast.
  • After that game I decided to play badminton regularly.
    • After one year my play have improved too much.
    • One night a teenager girls came up to park and played with one of our good players.
    • I couldn’t believe he defeated against that little girl.
    • I asked from my friends and they told me that she works with coach since childhood.
    • So, I decided to track down a coach.
  • I found someone and he is one of my best friends now.
    • We play and practice every week and my play improve too much since then.

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