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    • Ethan, a shor story about depression

    • Ethan is a journalist who works in ”Close Observation Magazine”.
  • He lives alone in a small apartment.
  • He is 25 years old.
  • He has worked there for 10 months.
    • He created a routine , so he could have time for entertaining watching TV and Netflix.
    • After nine months he felt tired, he didn’t want to follow his routine, so he change his mind to not take care more about do the dishes, do the to .
    • In general, he didn’t want to do the chores in his home.
  • But it didn’t stay on his routine, Ethan begins to get bored about everything then he failed several times in his job, because he made mistakes writting and correcting articles, being unpunctual.
    • As we can see, Ethan behavior is going bad but he continued like that.
  • He lost Netflix access, he just wash the dish, spoon and glass he needs.
    • Some day he was called by his boss who claimed him about his mistakes.
    • It was devastating for him, Ethan prefered buy fast food instead of making dinner.
    • Burger was tasty and flavorful but a pair hours later when Ethan was going home it change in stomache, a painful one.
    • He passed an awful night.
    • In the morning Ethan had to call his family.
    • His mom, Claire, went to his house and take care about his health, she asked his bests friends to call him and give him energy and motivation.
    • Fortunately, that worked great on Ethan.
  • He cried a lot and felt really bad.
    • But thanks to his mom idea he finally could retake his life control.

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