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    • England Housing

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  • The bar chart illustrates how the changes that happened to the households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
  • At first glance, we see that the relationship between households in owning and renting accommodation is inverse, in which the percentage of the households owning housing increased from 20% in 1918 to 33% in 1939 then kept the same level of growth to 1952.
  • Then in 1961 went up to 42%, and continued in development to peak at 69% in 2001.
  • On the contrary, we clearly notice that the growth of renting accommodation in England and Wales was at its highest point in 1918,with 77%.
  • In 1939 decreased to 67%, the from 1939 to 1952 continued at the same level of growth.
  • In 1961 the growth rate went down to 58%, and this decline persisted to 2001, reaching the lowest point with 31%.
  • But in 2001 the contrary has occurred, the owning accommodation was that was escalating fell to 64%.
  • On the other hand, the accommodation renting rose to 36 %.
  • In summary, we notice the growth relation of each of them is inverse.
  • But in 1970 their percentages became equal, which both of them reach 50%.

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