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  • Problems of the fashion industry

  • Nowadays, most people share the view that fashion is necessary to determinate our personalities but does it mean that fashion is good for our lifes?
  • Firstly, it is undeniable that we judge people for their appareance.
  • As a result, we estigmatize a lot of persons only for their outfits and we have to be able to meet people without prejudices.
  • Secondly, the price of clothes is also an important point to consider because now we have elevated prices.
  • Therefore, we only need to generate a responsable consume of the fashion industry.
  • Ultimatly, ”fast-fashion” should be mentioned since is an actual problem to solve.However, we need to offer alternatives to the high consume of clothes, as promote thirfshops.
  • From my point of view the fashion industry has bad effects on people’s live but we can control them and make it less dangerous to the society.
  • Is necessary to promulgate another healthier way to life the fashion industry.

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