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Rédigé par pandastic - English

  • Save your planet!

  • Nowadays, most people share the view that our world is praying for help.
  • We have been careless for too many years and now we have to live with high levels of pollution… Can we have one chance to change that?
    • Firstly, it is undeniable that the transports generate a lot of air pollution that create hard breathing problems to the population.
    • As a result, we could use another transport like bicycle, train, bus or maybe go walking!
    • Secondly, rivers and seas are also an important point to consider because now we have the major part of our water contaminated and we need it clean to have an appropriate life.
  • Therefore, we have to promulgate the importance of water awareness and how much we need to take care of our rivers and seas.
    • Last but not least, clothing factories should be mentioned since are one of the most polluting factories.
    • However, there’s one simple solution, to show the people how to live with the necessary and avoiding the “fast-fashion”.
  • In my point of view, we have a lot of work to do If we want to restore our world.
    • That’s not impossible, we have to work with a common objective and think about the 4 R’s: recycle, reduce, reuse and rethink.

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