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Poruka od antonina_p - English

    • essay about public health

    • More and more doctors is under big pressure at their work.
    • Also queues to doctors are becoming longer and longer.
    • But there are some solutions for it.
    • Firstly, we are supposed to make an appointment at an concrete hour.
    • It is frequent that to doctors offices are overcrowded by many patients who waste much time.
    • Also, doctors are exhausted because they have to take an appointed patients directly one after another and they do not have time to unwind.
    • On the other day however, it is so that there are no patients at all before a doctor’s office.
    • Therefore, it is very important to come on an scheduled hour because then we wil decrease queues.
    • Secondly, we are supposed to come on our scheduled appointments.
    • We are not supposed to leave (miss?) our appointments without a reason.
    • If we do not come on an appointment we will must to come again.
    • It causes that we will be on a visit twice although we will be only one.
    • If we know that we cannot come on a visit we will should cancel our visit.
    • That way someone can come in our place.
    • To sum up, I think if we make an appointment at an specific hour and do not leave them we will decrease queues to doctors.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English