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Teks daripada jmakogon - English

  • Voyage

  • The sun was setting or rising.
    • Without living the whole day, it was difficult to understand what time of day it might be.
    • We’re riding in a big black car, and the highway had to end at 5 km.
  • Then, there was a sign ’Вітаємо’ and the next 40 km we had to drive through the city, houses, traffic lights, and traffic.
  • Isn’t it true that traffic jams are like open jails?
    • We can take on a free road, but we don’t have a choice. I’m so cold. It’s so hot.
    • Can that happen that it’s cold and hot at the same time?
  • At the same time, in another city, in another country, and on the other street, a leaf fell to the ground.
    • In front of the average citizen, and while it still had signs of life, the citizen didn’t pay attention and went ahead.
  • Homeless on the left saw what happened but said nothing even though there was something to say.
  • In this area, there were no trees, only small bushes, and some grass.
    • The leaf fell from the sky, and the homeless was sure.
  • The average citizen stopped.
  • He realized that something had happened, but from the unusual, he saw only the blue, as the sky, eyes of the homeless, and the homeless saw the brown, like a sandstorm, eyes of the first.
  • After a couple of minutes, this place became empty, as if it had never existed.
  • We’re already dispersed on roads, and the city is being destroyed.
  • It may have already been destroyed, but there was life and we have evidence of this.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English