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  • A motivation letter

    • These days many countries impose sanctions and tend to have fewer commons with my motherland.
    • However, the Republic of Korea is one of few countries that continue to develop business ties with Russia: cooperation in energy and oil-gas sector; investment in business projects of Russian Far Easter district, etc. In summer 2020, I participated in the Research Paper Competition dedicated to the first official Korean envoy to Imperial Russia Lee Beom Jin.
    • Doing the research, I have learned the two countries have a long history of diplomatic relations, which began in the 19th century.
    • Consequently, education obtained in South Korea will be valued in Russia.
    • Besides, when I was an exchange student in Kangnam University, I found advantages of Korean education system that Russian system does not have: a flexible schedule, the possibility to reject the class within one month, opportunity to make by my own study plan over the entire period.
    • All these features make Korean education highly competitive, and I can be sure I will have a qualified education /// Being in another country rather than Korea it might be complicated to work on speaking skills.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English