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  • Staycation

    • During the semester break, I just staycation.
    • Most of my time had spent with a boredom because I did the monotonous activities, such as watched movies or some videos, listening to music, helped my mom to do home work, read short stories, thought about my future and became overthinking, or just slept.
    • Beside those dullness things, I felt grateful because I could gather with my family.
    • Furthermore, I could teach some children in my place and did community work.
    • I think all what I had done was not really bad.
    • May be I will miss them when I ought to go to an offline-college in the city.

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    • Most of my time had spent with a boredom because I did the monotonous activities, such as watched movies or some videos, listening to music, helped my mom to do home work, read short stories, thought about my future and became overthinking, or just slept.
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    • Most of mythe time had spent with a boredom because I did the monotonousI was bored as I engaged daily in the same activities, such ase.g., watcheding movies or some videos, listening to music, helpeding my mom to do home usework, reading short stories, thought about my future and became overthinking, or justinking (read: overthinking) about my future, or sleepting.
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