添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

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  • The winter’s tale

  • Winter came to my city.
    • It happens not often, so I’m really happy with this winter’s tale.
    • And yesterday was the coldest night in the year and actually on my memory too.
  • It was about -20 C!
    • There is nothing unusual for most Russia, but not for Kaliningrad, where usual winter temperature is about -1 C +1C.
    • The irony is that exactly this day my friends and I chose for going to bathhouse..bathhouse on the water!
    • It is located on the Kaliningrad Bay, which of course freezed by this temperature.
    • Fortunately, there was an ice-hole where we dived after the steam room.
    • Also it was nice coming home through the night snowy city with its white roads and frosty steams.
    • In the morning I somewhat quicker went out to creak my feet by the snow and to breathe this cold air.
    • I’m really sorry that by the middle of the week this winter’s tale are going to die at +4C.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English