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    • Some people say that television is useful for education, while

    • Some would argue the Tv has benefits in education goals, While others said it is just for entertainment.
    • I believe that television has a huge impact on the education procedure.
    • On the one hand, almost all television production companies focus on amusement and bring enjoyment to the people.
    • If you searched, you would find a lot of movie types like Drama, Action, and Adventure films that do not include any educational purposes.
    • For example, Netflix released a year ago a hundred thousand Action movies.
    • However, I believe this does not contradict the important role of tv in teaching, and what can offer to it, and we can use it in the knowledge felids like entertainment industry to attract student and people.
    • On the other hand, Tv has all the tools to use it in the education targets, and it can make it fun and enjoyable in the teaching process.
    • For instance, The BBC movie called the earth was a big influence on people and scientists, because explain complicated issues in a simple way using new technology in the tv industry which make teaching attractive.
    • I believe the tv should use deep in the education process because will be simplified teaching and make it easy to understand.
    • In conclusion, although there is a big production in television entertainment, using tv in education still had benefits and a very useful method.
  • I Recommend using tv in all the fields of studying due to make the materials more fun and attractive to children and attract people to the knowledge too.

МОЛЯ, ПОМОГНЕТЕ ДА КОРИГИГИРАМЕ ВСЯКО ИЗРЕЧЕНИЕ! - English