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  • Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe

    • There Englishman young called Robinson Crusoe, he went voyage sea although difficulties that faced him from parents and refuse them to him, during the first voyage his be attacked from pirates and became servant for them and by a tough day, he managed to escape and during his escape, he meted a Portuguese ship captain and it was the ship vectored to Brazil, during that he assisted the captain Crusoe to become the owner of the farm.
    • During his stay in Brazil, he joins to the mission.
    • In one of the voyages, a storm came across in Orkano river and one of the voyages, a storm came across in Orkano river and caused the death of everybody except Crusoe who survived.
    • Also, he brought the necessary stuff for the ship, he lived lonely in the island.
    • He had been hunting there, planting corn, making pottery, raising goats, and praying to thank of God for blessings.
    • In addition, a cannibalism group attacked Crusoe in the island then Crusoe planned to Capture one or two of prisoners who was among them his friend ” Friday” that his taught him the English language and Christianity.
    • As the days go by, other group came.
    • Crusoe and his friend cooperated to kill the most of them except his friend’s father, his friend and a Spanish man that told him about the presence of a group of Spanish that had in the sea.
    • During his help for them, an English ship appeared and dominated on then Spanish ship .
    • Therefore, Crusoe and the ship captain backable to England.
    • Crusoe left the island and moved to Portuguese to meet the captain that care about his farm then back to England by road. as they arrived to the prance mountains attacked them wolves and Crusoe left his farm and money to his friend then he got married, his wife died, and in the end he returned again to the island to complete the rest of his life alone without his servant Friday, who returned with his mother to his tribe.

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

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    • There Englishman young called Robinson Crusoe, he went voyage sea although difficulties that faced him from parents and refuse them to him, during the first voyage his be attacked from pirates and became servant for them and by a tough day, he managed to escape and during his escape, he meted a Portuguese ship captain and it was the ship vectored to Brazil, during that he assisted the captain Crusoe to become the owner of the farm.
      Vota adesso!
    • There was a young Englishman young called Robinson Crusoe, h. He went on a voyage sea althoughin spite of the difficulties that faced him from parents andwho refuse them to him, dhim permission to go. During the first voyage, his beship was attacked fromby pirates and he was captured and became a servant forto them and by a tough. On a difficult day, he managed to escape and during his escape, he meted a Portuguese ship captain and it was the ship vectoredwhose ship was sailing to Brazil, d. During that voyage, he assisted the captain. Crusoe tolater becoame the owner of thea farm.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1
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    • In one of the voyages, a storm came across in Orkano river and one of the voyages, a storm came across in Orkano river and caused the death of everybody except Crusoe who survived.
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    • InDuring one of the voyages, a storm came across in Orkano river and one of the voyages, a storm came across inthe Orkano river and caused the death of everybody except Crusoe who survived.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3
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    • In addition, a cannibalism group attacked Crusoe in the island then Crusoe planned to Capture one or two of prisoners who was among them his friend ” Friday” that his taught him the English language and Christianity.
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    • In addition, a cannibalism group attacked Crusoe ion the island t. Then, Crusoe planned to Ccapture one or two of the prisoners who was a. Among them was his friend ” Friday” that hiswho he taught him the English language and Christianity.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 6AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 6
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    • Crusoe and his friend cooperated to kill the most of them except his friend’s father, his friend and a Spanish man that told him about the presence of a group of Spanish that had in the sea.
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    • Crusoe and his friend cooperated to kill the most of them except his friend’s father, his friend and a Spanish man that told him about the presence of a group of Spanish that had in thebeen at sea.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 8AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 8
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    • Crusoe left the island and moved to Portuguese to meet the captain that care about his farm then back to England by road. as they arrived to the prance mountains attacked them wolves and Crusoe left his farm and money to his friend then he got married, his wife died, and in the end he returned again to the island to complete the rest of his life alone without his servant Friday, who returned with his mother to his tribe.
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    • Crusoe left the island and movtravelled to Portugueseal to meet the captain that care abouttook care of him, his farm and then took him back to England by road. aAs they arrived ato the pPrance mMountains, they were attacked themby wolves and. Afterwards, Crusoe left his farm and money to his friend then he got married, h. His wife died, and in the end he returned again to the island to completespend the rest of his life, alone without his servant Friday, who had returned with his mother to his tribe.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 11AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 11