Korreksies

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  • The savage

    • * Before reading my made-up story reserve sound reason to master flippancy this poem( this is just my dream) Chapter 1 It`s no point trying to get home because you are in jungle.
  • How did we get here?
    • We throw out here by thunder-storm.
    • The squat enchanter punished for naughtiness us and influence this.
    • indeed, we got scared a lot.
    • But we didn`t show the white feather.Sparing no effort we reserved food, logs and built a log-house in a flash.
    • Suddenly we saw heavyset savage, who was cutting down trees.
    • Enclosing him we could see lot`s of mess, foal fruits and other rotten stumps.
  • He was far from innocuous.
    • My sweet girlfriend steps to him near and became frown.
    • Then somehow she get shrilled. She`s wrong.
    • At one second savage pushed her away with such worth that she staggered and fell.
    • She had passed out after this.
    • I felt much of impotency.
    • But in the end i produced robust hammer and the savage had to throw up his arms.
    • I wasn`t be able to help myself wish asking where are pinguid lands nearby, open my mouth but...
    • To my sorrow and despair i was surrounded by tribe of indigenes.
  • Suddenly my girl woke up.....

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