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Healthcare obesity problem.

• Over the last 20 years we have seen organizations trying to tackle the increasing problem of obesity , one solution on the table is to usher in a more strict program of physical education in the school curriculum.

• In the following paragraphs, I will explore the causes as well as the explanation of my own viewpoint for this issue.

• As for the causes of overweight there is a study published by the University of Cambridge saying that 70% of our body constitution depends on our diet, 20% is attributed to how much a person exercises, finally 10% relies on (accounts for) genetic factors.

• Another blatant reason for this is the inadequate eat and run culture especially in big cities where nobody has enough time to inform themselves about the products, we are consuming furthermore to prepare a meal rich in nutrients.

• Taking the previous data into account I firmly believe that more exercise would not benefit as much as an educational food program, giving proper directions to people on what to eat in order to stay healthy.

• On the same note, the Mexican government imposed stiffen regulations for labeling products therefore everyone will be able to identify what are the possible risks of eating every type of aliments particularly junk and plain food.

• To sum up, if we want to address the obesity problem the best way to do it would be better and prompt information about the food we ingest, increasing the amount of exercise is not necessarily beneficial.

• Thanks for your correction and feedback.