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  • Camping

    • Sorry, but I forgot to tell you about that, but, yes, I went camping with my friends last weekend.
    • We were not sure to to go or not because the weather was dreadful but the next day the weather changed.
  • It was sunny and warm and we started to get ready to set off.
    • We took my dad’s car although my dad doesn’t approve of it, but I persuaded him and he allowed us to take the car.
    • Sometimes he can’t to put on when I take his car for a long time.
    • One of my friend couldn’t go with us this time because he was really swamped at his work.
    • Sometimes he has to work on weekends.
    • Fortunately he was paid enough and hus career took off.
    • So we took some equipment, warm clothes and food.
  • One of my friends took his guitar.
    • Actually, he’s veru talented but his talent is not full appreciated by our local club where he wants to play.
  • His dream is to give a great gig one day.
    • On our way to the place we bought some drinks and a seller threw in three free packs of potato chips. We were lucky!
    • It took 1 hour to come.
    • Finally we arrived.
    • We were not tired of our trip because we could escape from the traffic jam and we didn’t need to wait for hour to drive.
  • I can’t stand traffic jams.
  • We started cooking some food.
    • I’m not a great cook but I could even make some potato over a campfire.
    • As my friend told me it could be a hit among customers.
    • So it was really delicious.
  • We played volleyball.
  • It’s our favourite game.
    • When it started getting dark we sat around the fire, sang songs and our friend played the guitar.
  • I love camping.
  • It’s a really rare chance for me to be with my close friends because we all have a busy social life and don’t have enough time to see each other more often like it used to be when we went to school.
    • So, if you can come to me the nest year, I would like you to go camping with us.
    • I guarantee you will a great time.

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