Korrekturen

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    • Using netiquette is important because online communication usually doesn’t give us a chance to express non-verbal signs that help us understand each other in a real-life face-to-face conversation.
    • For example, the impossibility to hear a tone of voice, see body gestures and facial expressions can lead to misinterpretation of our message.
    • Especially when someone likes to write in a sarcastic manner and add some humor.
    • Also, it’s crucial to do not become personal in hot discussions about politics or religion as we better don’t do that in a real life.
    • We also don’t know if a person from the other side of our screens was victims of racism, physical violence, etc. So it’s better to discuss those themes carefully or even avoid them.
  • The consequences of bad netiquette in an online learning environment are that someone may be offended or outraged by someone else’s rudeness or familiarity.
    • Even the person does not mean to harm anyone if he or she is not familiar with rules for online communication and does not know how other people perceive their TEXTS THAT ARE WRITTEN IN CAPS LOCK they may come across as impolite and too informal.
    • Which is not gonna serve them well during their studies.
  • Netiquette is very important to use in peer assessment.
    • When you critic someone else’s work you must be sure that you give feedback not to the person but to his or her work.
    • Some people take criticism of their work too personally and it’s why necessary to be polite and concise while peer assess.
    • It is also important to note was done good and what can be improved at his/her work.
    • When I was addressed with unconstructive criticism from one of my peers who gave bad grades for all aspects and wrote only one overall comment ”well done!” I was indignant.
    • I didn’t know what to do with my text, how can I improve it, and what exactly was wrong.
    • I didn’t receive feedback about the previous week’s writing assignment yet, but I received feedback on discussion forum posts.
  • Most of them are fair and give me an understanding of what can be done better.
    • For example one of my peers pointed out that I didn’t make connections with the story we have read, what lessons I took from the story, and how I will apply those lessons during my studies at university.
    • Even all of those elements I mentioned in my discussion post I understand that next time I need to make them more clear.
  • I hope the feedback I gave to my peers was helpful at some point.
    • At least I tried to make them helpful and follow instructions and assessment criteria.
  • Also, I tried to write my feedback with respect and point on what was well written.

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    • Using netiquette is important because online communication usually doesn’t give us a chance to express non-verbal signs that help us understand each other in a real-life face-to-face conversation.
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    • Using netiquette is important because online communication usually doesn’t give us a chance to express the non-verbal signs that help us understand each other in a real-life face-to-face conversation.
    • Using netiquette is important because online communication usually doesn’t give us a chance to expressthe opportunity exercise non-verbal signs that helpin order for us understand each other in a real-life face-to-face conversation.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5
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    • For example, the impossibility to hear a tone of voice, see body gestures and facial expressions can lead to misinterpretation of our message.
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    • For example, the impossibility tof hearing a tone of voice, see body gestures and facial expressions can lead to misinterpretation of our message.
    • For example, the impossibility tof hear aing people's tone of voice, seeand seeing their body gestures and facial expressions can lead to misinterpretationunderstand of our message.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6
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    • Also, it’s crucial to do not become personal in hot discussions about politics or religion as we better don’t do that in a real life.
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    • Also, it’s crucial to do not become personal in hot discussions about politics or religion as we better don’shouldn't do that in a real life.
    • Also, it’s crucial to do not becomenot to take it personally in hota heated discussions about politics or religion, as we better don’t do thatnd ditto/likewise in a real life.
    • Also, it’s crucial to do not becomeget personal in hoteated discussions (or debates) about politics or religion as we better don’t do that in a real lifejust like in face-to face interactions.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8
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    • We also don’t know if a person from the other side of our screens was victims of racism, physical violence, etc. So it’s better to discuss those themes carefully or even avoid them.
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    • We also don’t know if a person from the other side of our screens wasere victims of racism, physical violence, etc. So it’s better to discuss those themes carefully or even avoid them.
    • We also don’t know if athe person fromat the other side of ourthe screens was a victims of racism, physical violence, etc. So it’s better to discuss those themes carefully or even avoid them.
    • We also don’t know if athe person fromon the other side of our screens was victims of racism, physical violence, etc. So it’s better to discuss those themeopics carefully or even avoid them.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9
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    • The consequences of bad netiquette in an online learning environment are that someone may be offended or outraged by someone else’s rudeness or familiarity.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10
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    • Even the person does not mean to harm anyone if he or she is not familiar with rules for online communication and does not know how other people perceive their TEXTS THAT ARE WRITTEN IN CAPS LOCK they may come across as impolite and too informal.
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    • Even if the person does not mean to harm anyone if he or she is not familiar with rules for online communication and does not know how other people perceive their TEXTS THAT ARE WRITTEN IN CAPS LOCK they may come across as impolite and too informal.
    • Even if the person does not mean to harm anyone if he or she is not familiar with the rules ofor online communication and does not know how other people perceive their TEXTS THAT ARE WRITTEN IN CAPS LOCK they may come across as impolite and too informal.
    • Even if the person does not mean to harmintend to offend anyone, if he or she is not familiar with the rules ofor online communication and does not know how other people perceive their TEXTS THAT ARE WRITTEN IN CAPS LOCK, then they may come across as impolite and too informalvulgar.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 11Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 11
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    • Some people take criticism of their work too personally and it’s why necessary to be polite and concise while peer assess.
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    • Some people take criticism of their work too personally and it’s why necessary to be polite and concise while peer assessing.
    • Some people take criticism of their work too personally and, hence why it’s why necessary to be polite and concise whileith peer assessments.
    • Some people take criticism of their work too personally and it’s why, which is why it is necessary to be polite and concise while peer assesen assessing peers.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 15Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 15
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    • When I was addressed with unconstructive criticism from one of my peers who gave bad grades for all aspects and wrote only one overall comment ”well done!” I was indignant.
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    • When I was addressed with unconstructive criticism from one of my peers who gave bad grades forin all aspects and wrote only one overall comment, ”well done!”, I was indignant.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 17Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 17
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    • I didn’t receive feedback about the previous week’s writing assignment yet, but I received feedback on discussion forum posts.
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    • I didn’haven't received feedback about the previous week’s writing assignment yet, but did I received feedback on from an online discussion forum posts.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 19Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 19
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    • For example one of my peers pointed out that I didn’t make connections with the story we have read, what lessons I took from the story, and how I will apply those lessons during my studies at university.
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    • For example, one of my peers pointed out that I didn’t make connections with the story we havthat we read, what lessons I took from the story, and how I will apply those lessons during my studies at university.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 21Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 21
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    • Even all of those elements I mentioned in my discussion post I understand that next time I need to make them more clear.
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    • Even all of those elements I mentioned in my discussion post I understand that next time I need to make themI understand that next time I need to make all elements I mentioned in my discussion post more clear.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 22Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 22
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