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  • Comparison Between Ice Hockey and Soccer

    • Body 1: Ice hockey is a sport with three main characteristics, and it is common in frozen area. Firstly.
    • Ice hockey is played on snow, and it needs ice to play the game.
    • Even though some places do not have snow, they can play the game by building ice rinks.
    • In the second, ice hockey has their own rules as well as other sports.
    • How the players can score the goal in the game?
  • When the whole puck passed over goal line, the referee scores it as a goal.
  • Also, ice hockey players cannot touch puck by their hands.
  • The last point, Ice hockey has some equipment make it distinctive from other sports.
  • The ice hockey players wear skates and use stick to push the pucks.
  • Body 2: Apart from ice hockey sport, soccer is also sport which has differences and a few similarities, and it is the most popular sport around the world.
  • The first point, Ice hockey and football are similar in wearing a protective pad.
  • The soccer players are used to wear protective pads in every games.
  • They wear shin pads to protect lower part of their legs.
  • Secondly, the duration of football game is a 90 minutes, whereas ice hockey is 60 minutes.
  • Football match consists of two-halves.
  • Each half is 45 minutes, and there are between two halves 15 minutes as break.
  • The last point, the soccer team consists of 11 players, and three substitutes are allowed during the game.
  • One the other hand, ice hockey team has 6 players, and all the players can be substituted.

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