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  • Biography

    • My name is Thalita Hana Rodrigues da Silva, i'm 15 years and I was born on September 15/2004, my parents are called Natalina and Jiumario.
    • I live in Paripe Salvador (BR) for three years with my mother and have a dog, it's name is Branquinha.
    • when I was a child when I was a child I traveled to Pernambuco with my father's family, when i came back i had an accident and broke my leg.

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    • My name is Thalita Hana Rodrigues da Silva, i'm 15 years and I was born on September 15/2004, my parents are called Natalina and Jiumario.
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    • My name is Thalita Hana Rodrigues da Silva, i. I'm 15 years and I was born on September 15/, 2004, m. My parents are callednames are Natalina and Jiumario.
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    • My name is Thalita Hana Rodrigues da Silva, iI'm 15 years and I was born on September 15/2004, my parents are called Natalina and Jiumario.
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    • when I was a child when I was a child I traveled to Pernambuco with my father's family, when i came back i had an accident and broke my leg.
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    • when I was a child w      When I was a child, I traveled to Pernambuco with my father's family, w. When iI came back i, I had an accident and broke my leg.
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